feed back from class about near finished film intro

we had feedback of our film so far and we noted down what needed to be improved.

• Too many Transitions (this is making the whole shot fade in and out when not wanted).
• Cut shots (it was said that some shots were too long and needed to be cut so it made more sense).
• Sound clean up (the sound in some places needed cleaning up E.G background noise and speech).

good points were :

• good varetiy of shot types
• good tesion building music chosen
• good use of close ups and angle shots

To address these issues we have changed some transitions and made a new sequence of cut up shots so it makes sense. we are also needing to do some detailed sound editing to make it sound as clear as it is needed to be.

Re-filming the night scene

the arch shot

snipers view

the picture I took of Kane and lewis

shot of lewis rehearsing 

snipers view

shot down the barrel

another shot down the barrel 

arch shot

re-directing 

the exchange

snipers view

over the shoulder cam 

walking shots

shooting in dark

camera view

setting up the lighting

torches taped to beams

torches on beams

beam with torch

more torches

me looking at the torches

Re-shooting the night scene

8th january, me and lewis setup about 16:00 when there is some light. then waiting for it to get dark then filmed the warehouse scene and the street scene afterwards.

filming the night scene

we began filming on the 4th of December with the night street scene filming a few clips

here are some pictures of us setting up and filming.

a few problems we encountered where we had over underestimated how the darkness would effect the filming, and also nearly froze after being out there for an hour or two.

me, lewis and kane setting up , while james poses  

lewis explaining shot corrections and me recording sound

 

me and lewis filming james as cast and crew watch 

location pictures

Me out side the building on the road.

low angle shot of the building

Kane on moped infrount of building

These are the front shots of the night scene and the where about of man 1 and man 2.

the shot of where the sniper would lay

inside shot of the killers sniping point

these are inside the warehouse and were the scene of the sniper will be taken. for safety we will set up in the light and wait for it to get dark.

print screens of editing

this is work our whole group was involved with, and we all contributed to the editing and addition of titles

 This is editing the press scene with the scrolling text

 This is the Breaking news box on the left.

 Now i have added the names on the top right.

 This is the sound recording of the crowd in the background

This is the finished edited of the press scene.

I have added the red box at the bottom and the Live at the top left.

progress update

we have all the shots for the intro , but we are going to re-shoot the night time scene.
we shot the TV scene recently and here are the pictures from it. 
cameraman lewis and actor james, shooting the scene

me setting up the camera out side the show room

the film intro on dvd in the shop

me directing where james will walk and what speed