feed back from class about near finished film intro

we had feedback of our film so far and we noted down what needed to be improved.

• Too many Transitions (this is making the whole shot fade in and out when not wanted).
• Cut shots (it was said that some shots were too long and needed to be cut so it made more sense).
• Sound clean up (the sound in some places needed cleaning up E.G background noise and speech).

good points were :

• good varetiy of shot types
• good tesion building music chosen
• good use of close ups and angle shots

To address these issues we have changed some transitions and made a new sequence of cut up shots so it makes sense. we are also needing to do some detailed sound editing to make it sound as clear as it is needed to be.